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Whimsical

With all four nations represented and united,
The celebrations of liberation rising to carnival,
The affairs of the new State of Fire we abandoned
For a few hours of fellowship… to the sound of the Flameos.

After we raised teacups to our triumph together,
Ty Lee whisks Mai to a girl's dance circle,
The rest of the group follows suit, leaving me
Sharing a relaxing respite… to the sound of Uncle's Sungi horn.

I thought I couldn't be happier watching from the walls,
After all, dancing hadn't happened here in half a century.
Then my mind's eye lost focus to the vision in front of my scar…
A smile below Southern eyes… and the dark palm outstretched to mine.

But what to do?

Months ago, a day at the beach was a struggle for sanity,
How different my next trip… real smiles in the sand.
A whole life of conflict, whether work or at play,
Until, with the world on the line, a group hug set me free.

My smile comes with a flourishing shrugging off of my robe,
And a flame from my heart sets a sparkle her eyes.
Her smile grows in elation, and I take her hand,
Rushing out to the floor with Abandon arrived.

Dry, chorded pain in my chest breaks loose in the revelry,
Both her hands held in mine, I spin the world on our axis.
I have a hundred connections with her within our worldless dance,
And after a lifetime in chains, I let go as I stare in her eyes and speak.

"I know what to do, now…"
Zuko lets go a lifetime of being uptight and revels in the magic of one moment with Katara.
ATLA belongs to Bryan and Michael. Thanks for all the dreams, guys.
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ShodanAllen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Thanks. It felt very fitting at the time I was writing it! I was having a internal dialouge with myself, "Really... you're gonna leave it at that, eh?" But that's whimsy for you. Somethings are better left unwritten.

Cheers!
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superdoodler26 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
thats so cute! i loved how you kept it short and simple! :iconzutaraplz:
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